Alfredo's Blog

Today I reviewed Alfredo's blog (partly because I could not access Allan's) and found some things that were good and bad. In the blog "Zimbabwe" he talks about how he had to research and then goes on explaining what exactly he found. Then he gave the more interesting facts from the site to engage the reader. This was a good thing because I knew exactly what was happening and was amazed at the facts. After he was finished he also gave the site URL which was useful, but it should have been made a link. In the blog "second week" he explains that Zimbabwe is in a bad water situation but does not make it too fancy. Just plain and simple, they are low on water. Somethings that he needs to watch is his spelling and grammar. If you read this Alfredo try just copying and pasting into word to fix the problems Also try to give some detailed facts. Thats it have a nice 3 day weekend